Tuesday, November 20, 2018

Medusa Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can't seem to speak, I don't have a voice
I open my mouth but out comes no noise
Don't care what I think, it just doesn't matter
The things in my head just build up and shatter
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Jacob Santacruz
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Naila Rais 23 November 2018

Wonderful start........ But remember u will be graceful for this life someday...10 Naila

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Jennifer Birchall 20 November 2018

I understand these thoughts and feelings only too well. Thank you for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 20 November 2018

An insightful depiction of depression written with clarity of thought and mind. Well crafted in persuasive expressions and nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Jacob.

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