Melting Ice Poem by Michelle Kuh

Melting Ice

Rating: 4.7


Cold and wet
It starts to drip
Melting ice on my lip

Cold and wet it slips
Melting ice with every sip.

Saturday, March 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: drink,drinking,melting
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
New to writing poems so I appreciate hearing all feedback good or bad!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 25 March 2018

A beautiful creation, well articulated and nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Michelle and do remain enriched.

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Alison mujati 25 March 2018

Beautiful poem you may also read mine .... Roselike

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 March 2018

Michelle, such a nice write....10+++++

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