Melting Ice Poem by Michelle Kuh

Melting Ice

Rating: 4.7


Cold and wet
It starts to drip
Melting ice on my lip

Cold and wet it slips
Melting ice with every sip.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
New to writing poems so I appreciate hearing all feedback good or bad!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 25 March 2018

A beautiful creation, well articulated and nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Michelle and do remain enriched.

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Alison mujati 25 March 2018

Beautiful poem you may also read mine .... Roselike

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 March 2018

Michelle, such a nice write....10+++++

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