Wednesday, July 16, 2008

Memories Comments

Rating: 2.8

I'm in love with a memory that won't slip out of my fingers
Its hard to let something go after so long
Every piece to the story starts out great
But ends with pure chaos
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Dane Dino
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Andrew Smallwood 11 March 2010

Liked your poem! I certainly understand the where the feeling is coming from!

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Bonnie Collins 16 July 2008

Enjoyed this feel to this, you have tempered the tone to the music of oh always me, however, life offers no guarentees unfortunatly, and many of us have been there and done that, and believe it or not, still doing it..... Remember things happen in life for a reason, sometimes the worst of reasons, and we dont always know the answer, but someday it will occur to you why...... Enjoyed this very much...... Bonnie

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