Monday, April 6, 2009

Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

I’ve been looking at the sea
It’s been quite sometime now
I really didn’t notice time
I didn’t mind somehow
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Arvie Calimlim
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Antonio Liao 14 May 2009

amazing poem...its horizontal view with a vertical emotion very beautiful...seeing what the mind feel...thank you a 10++++

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

A Shakespearean kind of poetry..great words and the flow is perfect..marvelous poem

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Danzen D. 08 April 2009

Romantic imagery...wonderful words...looking at the waves and the color of the sun in the water while reminiscing...soft, warm, hearty, touching...if you tell this to the personally to the one whom you are referring to...I'm very sure he would say 'I love you' back to you...

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