Tuesday, December 12, 2017

Message In A Bottle Comments

Rating: 4.3

Dust sleeping on your bookshelf
and all your plants are drying out
you are too busy to save yourself
is your mind heading for burnout?
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Akash Mandal
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Bipasha D 12 December 2017

Yes, life is sometimes unfair. But we must not lose hope. A wonderful poem! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2017

The question asked in the last line of third stanza makes your poem endearing A wonderful poem

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Rini Shibu 12 December 2017

Let your deepest thoughts float on the surface and don't let yourself to sink

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 12 December 2017

Secrets are not to express and life gives you so much to share. Nice write

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Akash 12 December 2017

Thank you so much for reading and for your feedback.

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Akash Mandal 12 December 2017

Thank you so much for reading and for your feedback.

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