Metaphoric Mood Poem by Judy Meibach

Metaphoric Mood



Like a pendulum,
or a metronome,
my moods swing -
backwards and forwards,
left to right
right to left -

Or is it more
like an elevator
that goes up and down
the high-rise building,
from top to bottom
stopping sporadically
at specified stops.

I pres all the buttons
on this new-fangled elevator
so that I can stop
the popping in my ears,
so that.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A poem that captures you, makes one want to read it again. I enjoyed it, as it was a different type of poetic write. Could imagine the movement... well done.; D

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Juan Olivarez 02 June 2010

nice poem judy. really enjoyed it.

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