Friday, November 2, 2007

Milieu Of The Grin Comments

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As I ramble on the milieu of grin
cared and carried by the flow green
yet maimed by the love as flower to bloom
as the morning waits for the sun to shine
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Dr subhendu kar
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Ewigi Liebe 27 November 2007

Slowly, surely, Not knowing why Faster, stronger, without care Our world shifts and shimmers and splits. Shattered shards cascade down Spurred by angry, lashing words Contorted faces, stone deaf ears Outside the whirlwind, We die inside. The scars run deep Jagged clefts in our souls We have suceeded in hurting And hurt ourselves.

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Thad Wilk 02 November 2007

Another great write Dr Kar! Always nicely descriptive! ! (10) ! Thad

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Aasiq the poet 02 November 2007

tremendous poem, Doctor, garu. khub bhala hoichchi.congrats.

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