Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,539 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

Milieu Of The Grin - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As I ramble on the milieu of grin
cared and carried by the flow green
yet maimed by the love as flower to bloom
as the morning waits for the sun to shine

exhausted never being bemused
though yet as bitter grim but sweetest still
lodged out breath as few hours to outbid
to reach the moon drizzling upon its gleam

even in deep dark yet braced by the love
when pierced even by the pricks of rose
in its petals as flesh oozing the blood
as blue by the moon when blinking to the sky.


Comments about Milieu Of The Grin by Dr subhendu kar

  • (11/27/2007 9:07:00 AM)


    Slowly, surely,
    Not knowing why
    Faster, stronger, without care
    Our world shifts and shimmers and splits.

    Shattered shards cascade down
    Spurred by angry, lashing words
    Contorted faces, stone deaf ears
    Outside the whirlwind,
    We die inside.

    The scars run deep
    Jagged clefts in our souls
    We have suceeded in hurting
    And hurt ourselves.
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  • (11/2/2007 7:53:00 AM)


    Another great write Dr Kar! Always nicely descriptive! ! (10) !
    Thad
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  • (11/2/2007 12:34:00 AM)


    tremendous poem, Doctor, garu. khub bhala hoichchi.congrats. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 2, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 21, 2011


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