Milieu Of The Grin Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Milieu Of The Grin

Rating: 5.0


As I ramble on the milieu of grin
cared and carried by the flow green
yet maimed by the love as flower to bloom
as the morning waits for the sun to shine

exhausted never being bemused
though yet as bitter grim but sweetest still
lodged out breath as few hours to outbid
to reach the moon drizzling upon its gleam

even in deep dark yet braced by the love
when pierced even by the pricks of rose
in its petals as flesh oozing the blood
as blue by the moon when blinking to the sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ewigi Liebe 27 November 2007

Slowly, surely, Not knowing why Faster, stronger, without care Our world shifts and shimmers and splits. Shattered shards cascade down Spurred by angry, lashing words Contorted faces, stone deaf ears Outside the whirlwind, We die inside. The scars run deep Jagged clefts in our souls We have suceeded in hurting And hurt ourselves.

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Thad Wilk 02 November 2007

Another great write Dr Kar! Always nicely descriptive! ! (10) ! Thad

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Aasiq the poet 02 November 2007

tremendous poem, Doctor, garu. khub bhala hoichchi.congrats.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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