Ajit Das


Mindscape - Poem by Ajit Das

I dream of designing a mindscape,
painting it with the colours
of love, affection, fraternity.
The brush glides over their contours,
but gets stuck, clogged
at hatred, violence, cruelty.
I try to erase them with a cutter;
they hit back ferociously.
I dip the brush in the colours
of kindness, tolerance, forgiveness.
It portrays on the canvas
a deeply concerned humane face
wavering between hope and despair.

Topic(s) of this poem: humanity


Comments about Mindscape by Ajit Das

  • Edmund Strolis (11/12/2015 5:07:00 AM)


    The poem starts out light, carefree and optimistic and then the challenges of reality set in clogged, still the attempt to make it work is met by resistance as they hit back ferociously. To end only with patience and kindness wavering between hope and despair..............wonderful 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (11/11/2015 10:55:00 PM)


    Amazingly portrayed thoughts. A very noble project becomes marred by conflicting notes and emotions. This is a reflection of our own life and society. I would like to quote some lines:
    of love, affection, fraternity.
    f kindness, tolerance, forgiveness.
    wavering between hope and despair.
    at hatred, violence, cruelty.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 11, 2015



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