Thursday, April 20, 2006

Misplaced Smiles Comments

Rating: 5.0

Standing still
yet slightly swaying.
lost within a herd of humans
Their heads bobbing
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***** ********* 20 April 2006

Awwww Vincent, such a sad ending, but I don't think a smile can be misplaced really in this world of claustraphobic life you describe so elequently in your poem. Smiles evaporate despair from my experience. Smiling at you, no mistaken 10 from Tai

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Danny Reynolds 20 April 2006

Been there, haven't put it in verse....yet? Great poem. Danny

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