Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,023 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Miss O Miss - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I don’t how I started
But I took pen in hand and stated
What was really in mind?
Something like beautiful rose or beautiful woman in special kind

So I penned “Miss I miss you”
Wrote several times and went through
Each sentence gave me special kind of feeling
I was opening up and freely feeling

The rose was less appealing
I wanted beautiful woman standing by and smiling
I looked at several pictures
But was not very much sure

I was maturing enough
To have smile and loud laugh
The single thought was drawing me close
I was ready to give any pose

“The woman of my dream” I wrote
She should have silver lines like moon
She must give me enough of comfort
Hold my hand and take me to distant land

I felt no puzzle
We were feeling as one
I had some liking for her
She always tried to smile at and come closer

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Comments about Miss O Miss by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Rajnish Manga (12/21/2015 9:06:00 PM)


    Very well articulated thoughts leading to your writing one of the most talked about poems at this Forum “Miss I miss you”. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2015 8:38:00 AM)


    I felt no puzzle
    We were feeling as one
    I had some liking for her
    She always tried to smile at and come closer
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 30, 2015



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