Pathik Tank


Miss You My Love - Poem by Pathik Tank

Miss you my love miss you my love

Everyday when sun sets,
My heart goes on rest,
The days when we were together,
now i am dieing to get together,
I remember the days when we shared the books,
I cry for those days of our school,
I was crazy for your cute little Smile,
I could run for that even a mile,
When your scooty chocked up in rain,
I knew this moment would never come again,
I know you like to have chocolate,
I regret that i was too late,
though i used to fail every time,
I was happy that you topped sometime,
I passed through the toughest phase,
but i was pleased seeing your face,
The day you told me'I WOULD NEVER FORGET YOU ever'
I wanted to freeze that moment forever,
Oh My love please make me alive,
Once again come back in my life,
Before i die i want to rest in your arms,
Before I die i want to feel your warmth,

Miss you my love Miss you my love

Topic(s) of this poem: lost love

Form: Free Verse


Poet's Notes about The Poem

It is a true story written by me.

Comments about Miss You My Love by Pathik Tank

  • Chinedu Dike (10/12/2015 6:27:00 PM)


    Very romantic and lovely. A well articulated love poem subtly penned from inner recesses of the heart with good rhyme scheme. Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly - a voyage of pure bliss. Thanks for sharing Pathik. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Kinyua Karanja (9/21/2015 8:47:00 AM)


    So sweet, So romantic it reminds me of numerous moments in such situations running after girls. like it, keep doing such nice work. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 21, 2015



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