Hugh Cobb

Rookie - 54 Points (29 January 1947 / New York, NY)

Missing Element - Poem by Hugh Cobb

Missing element defies sleep:
I wake up calling names,
illusion's plaything -
only you're never there
when eyes finally clear.
You're still in that realm from
which I was expelled.

& when consciousness
returns, reluctant
to assert its dominion
over dreamtime's mutable realm
I take a breath, look around
observing only
an empty space
and I, alone
among the scattered covers.

(Copyright 1/16/2006)


Comments about Missing Element by Hugh Cobb

  • (1/26/2006 11:13:00 PM)


    yes, hugh, i feel this poem goes well with my 'wake-up call'...and it is a very fine poem in itself.

    thanks!

    u.
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  • (1/18/2006 7:11:00 PM)


    This poem was inspired by a comment I made to a poem by Ulrike Gerbig. Her poem and my comment worked together in some mysterious way to inspire and produce this poem.
    Thanks to Ulrike and to my muse.

    Hugh
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  • (1/16/2006 10:42:00 PM)


    My eyes blurry after I read this poem, and in my attempt to write my comments. When a person is missing an essential part to their life or being...imagination saves the day, but never can it save the moment of realization....which hurts the most. Exceptional poem Hugh.

    Angie
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  • (1/16/2006 10:35:00 PM)


    Hugh, I can relate to this! Experiencing that rejection and awakening to discover a loss that wass not there...OR was it? I like 'Missing Element'
    L
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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 18, 2006


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