Heart's Song, The Inadequacy Of Words Poem by Hugh Cobb

Heart's Song, The Inadequacy Of Words

Rating: 4.5

How can I express the inexpressible?
Paint with words a portrait of my heart
when I think of you -
Not the pulsing muscle
pumping blood
but the whirling center
of feeling itself?

Descriptions fail;
though I might compare you
to a day in late Spring
when life bursts forth
changeable as
weather in early June.

I could tell you how
I fell, helpless, beneath your gaze,
my heart willing captive
to laughing eyes & winsome smile.
How it sings when we speak;
how I remain in thrall
held by the beauty of your spirit;
how it longs for your presence
in more than memory
or a disembodied voice
in the ether.

I could tell you all this
& so much more
it could fill volumes
& still not suffice.
Just know this:

My heart has made its choice
& I, its rapt & hopeless slave,
can only surrender & obey.

(Copyright 12/30/2005)

Faith Elizabeth Brigham 30 December 2005

a deeply moving and breathtakingly beautiful love poem expertly written...great poem!

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kskdnj sajn 30 December 2005

Hugh...I'm sure you have just created every woman's favorite love poem. This was breathtaking...but my words are 'truly' inadequate. Thanks for sharing...this kind of emotion is inspiring for the new year.

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Patricia Gale 15 February 2006

How beautiful. Your words how they flowed, makes on envious over the woman who was the inspiration for this. Simply Wondeful. Regards, Patricia

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Mary Nagy 13 January 2006

Wow, this is true romance Hugh! What a lucky woman she is.........this really is beautiful. Sincerely, Mary

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Cj Heck 04 January 2006

This is beautiful and so very romantic - your lady is very lucky to know you feel that way. Very nice. Warmest regards, CJ

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Joseph Daly 31 December 2005

Hugh, this is a sublime discourse on frustration, no matter how mellifluent we are ther will always be a time when we are stuck; when words will fail us. This piece is not concerned with romantic yearning it is an observation on our limited abilities. At the same time as expressing those limitations you put the message of love over very well. Which seems ironic.

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Uriah Hamilton 30 December 2005

Thanks for this poem, another victim of desire.

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