Wednesday, May 20, 2015

Missing You Comments

Rating: 4.5

Let me wake up from this dream, or is it nightmare
I swam through your feelings upstream, did you even care
Your mood swing made me reach heights and then the string was cut,
I had enjoyed even the silly fights before ur feelings got shut.
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Swathi Harish
COMMENTS
Rahul Shivakumar 21 May 2015

How well you have put it all together :) It is, without a doubt an awesome poem :)

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Chinedu Dike 20 May 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects us profoundly. It's whimsical and temperamental, coming and may leave without warning. It's a well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Ayman Parray 20 May 2015

Some people we can never forget, good poem. Thanks for sharing Swathi

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