Mistake Again Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mistake Again

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Mistake again

It is shock
And do not run out of stock
It carries heaviness
And impact is seen on face

"I get busy"
And it is not easy
To spare time on silly things
She was hell bent with sad tunings

I feel deep hell
It does not go well
With my temperament
I feel something as missing or absent

She seemed seasoned
And well reasoned
With her arguments
That was sent

Without notice
I felt down with promises
I struck her name down
And made the mistake again

Mistake Again
Saturday, April 16, 2016
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2016

Without notice I felt down with promises I struck her name down And made the mistake again

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Ratnakar Mandlik 16 April 2016

A beautiful poem, a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2016

1Elizabeth Ongpauco Comments welcome Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2016

Elizabeth Ongpauco Ohh dear friend, you We all make mistakes The beauty of life Is at stake If not seen for sure There may be reasons Why it is isn't easy these seasons One must understand it all It could be very difficult to face the world Unlike · Reply · 1 · 1 min

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2016

Michele Fitzpatrick Dennehy That was brilliant hasmukh x Unlike · Reply · 1 · 24 mins 1 hour ago

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 April 2016

welcome jenesease miguel Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2016

I really like the rhymes 16 Apr by Sunny Day to Mistake again

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2016

Hey, this is good 16 Apr by Sunny Day to Mistake again

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2016

Ratnakar Mandlik (4/16/2016 4: 58: 00 AM) A beautiful poem, a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. (Report) 4 hours ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 April 2016

x1Elizabeth Ongpauco Comments welcome Unlike · Reply · 1 · 4 hours ago

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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