Mistakes Poem by Jocelyn Dunbar

Mistakes



The wrong decision suffered
Painful experience to the whole
Functioning of life, stages of a different system
That exists in the everyday journey.

The desperate aching heart,
The painful emotion, the disturbing mind,
A broken life crying to the deep
Painful choices that have made moves
Every step of the way.

A wrong action that does things
Produce confusing level of motives
To the right perspective of doing,
Missing every good opportunity
To live life to be happy and prosperous.

A wrong choice that goes on in a
Series of everyday concerns that activate
Activities working in life duration time.
A mistake on a deeper level, a pattern of
Life moving, doing and acting concerning details,
By action and choices in life.

© Jocelyn Dunbar
19 March 2007
12: 00 PM

Wednesday, March 21, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: verse
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 23 March 2007

The poem with good messagfe in verse of good action of life moving, doing, acting concerning details, a matter made by decision, choices........... best wishes for this active poet

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