Misty Mountain Mirage (An Acrostic) Poem by Dr John Celes

Misty Mountain Mirage (An Acrostic)

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Mountainous terrain steep
In the Tibetan plateau, where the
Sky almost
Touches the horizon
Yonder, with the

Mist moving up from the vale below,
Over the tall pine-trees and thick foliage,
Uniting the clouds from above
Naturally, and blocking the visual acuity of
The tired, trekking mountaineers on their
Arduous route down the mountain slopes,
In the intense heat of the rising sun,
Notwithstanding the many

Miles of shrubs and undergrowth that lie ahead, looking
Impossible to even the expert climber, who is momentarily
Relieved and excited by the mirage of an old castle
Appearing suddenly from nowhere,
Giving a ‘de ja vu’ feeling to all up there
Eyeing the beauty of the ancient masonry.

Copyright by Dr John Celes 7-26-2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Excellent images! ! i felt like I was on the walk up the side of the mountain..this poem is a real treasure... a ten from me..

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Susan Jarvis 26 July 2008

A painting in words. I like your use of 'tired trekking' - this alliterative term conjures up the fatigued plodding of the exhausted mountaineers. A visual delight of an acrostic poem. S :)

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