Mom I Want To Disclose Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mom I Want To Disclose

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"Mom I want to disclose to you"
Confide you alone for being very much true
Will you forgive me if I commit sin?
But it had been my observation since

Mother was surprised to hear
His doctor son was speaking with little fear
Words were spoken like parrot
Mother felt surprised and waited to hear about

"My dispensary is not running well"
For many days I wanted to speak it or tell
Today I have gathered little strength to speak
My feet crumble and tongue feels very weak

"Any special reason you have found out son"?
"Can you site me any example or reason"
Mother eagerly posed a question and waited
"It is all your face when I see you while going to clinic" he stated

Mom it will be better if you avoid you audience
I shall proper there after if you stop at once
I shall propose or take you to old age home
There you need wait for me and welcome

She got shocked and could find no answer as what to reply
She stared at his face but answer was known or implied
I shall search the solution and mother retired to room
Her face had turned pale and then descended the gloom

She had collected money in one of the bags as courtesy
Her son used to give her everyday some money
She called her daughter and advised her to hand over
This bag to son when she was no more or her life was over

Jain sect is observing holy eight days celebration
One of the Jain seers made this starling revelation
They might have come across such an incidence
As this has become house hold practice at present

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 January 2013

Seen by 7 Steven Glenn likes this. Steven Glenn Wonderful piece Hasmukh Mehta thank you for posting 8 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2012

too long Clayton Nichols44 minutes ago makes no sence Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago poetry is to be felt in long run dear

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2012

........... Gaurav Tyagi1 hour ago It is a household story. But in the poem above, what happened to Mom is she gone? Comment 2 Comments+1 Hasmukh Mehta1 hour ago she died with messageGive this money to him as he may too face same story bu his son +1 Gaurav Tyagi56 minutes ago He surely will children learn what they see.... :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 September 2012

“Mom I want to disclose to you” Confide you alone for being very much true

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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