Sagorika Chakraborty

Rookie - 313 Points (14 Sep 1991 / Delhi)

Moments Don't Pass But Years Do - Poem by Sagorika Chakraborty

Moments don't pass
But years do
I let go off time
Its peaceful
The timelessness

I travel
At my own pace
It ain't slow
It ain't fast either
It's mine
And it's perfect
Stilled
Lived
Cherished

F or each year
When I turn in another year
I realize
Moments don't pass
But years do...

Topic(s) of this poem: poetry, time


Comments about Moments Don't Pass But Years Do by Sagorika Chakraborty

  • Souren Mondal (12/1/2015 11:24:00 PM)


    Sometimes a moment can be more difficult to get through rather than a whole year. Interesting poem.

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    P: S: There are couple of things that I would like to point out however

    Fisrtly, you used 'I' in small rather than capitalising it... Is that a stylistic effort on your part? ? Even if it is perhaps you may avoid it, I would suggest.

    Secondly, in the lines -

    'Its mine
    And its perfect'

    Were you trying to say 'It is mine/ And it is perfect'? ?

    In that case it should be 'it's' - 'It's mine/And it's perfect.'

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    Either ways, the poem was good.. Thanks for inviting me to read your poem...

    Cheers :)
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    Souren Mondal Souren Mondal (12/2/2015 1:38:00 AM)

    i kno dat flng vry wl: p tk cr :)

    Sagorika Chakraborty Sagorika Chakraborty (12/2/2015 12:53:00 AM)

    Thnx fr the inputs... Will make the necessary changes...

    P.S. Too much of texting has really hit the spellings hard

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  • Lubinda Lubinda (11/30/2015 6:14:00 PM)


    So true, the moments we have along the years never fade away! Great poem! Thanx for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Lubinda Lubinda (11/30/2015 6:13:00 PM)


    So true, the moments we have along the years never fade away! Great poem! (Report) Reply

    Sagorika Chakraborty Sagorika Chakraborty (11/30/2015 10:23:00 PM)

    Glad you liked it...

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 2, 2015


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