Money Matters Comments

she has saved for her death expense...you don't get to see true indian poems which brings out the life style of indian woman[not now].in this site..you have presented it very well mam....thank you again madam for the support and appreciation you have given me right from beginning...even in tamil i saw to it that in my poem the word don't carry the poem..it is the thought..which i thought should be poetic and for a person like me not very rich in poetic vocabulary..this suited me..iam lucky that the english most of them write in simple language..regarding subjects i think you also deal with a variety...i have tried a few senryu's 5-7-5 which i learnt from carl harris and sandra maitryes, , try them

I like the repetition and aliteration in this. It makes for a real musicality that underlies the anger of the narrative. The final line is an excellent ending and show great restraint in its usage.