Thursday, November 19, 2009

Monotonous Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

My life is void of optimism
I have become empty
At times
you can see can see Sadness quietly, curled up in a ball, in the corner
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Judy Jones
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I thought it was awsome even though it is written with a stain of sadness. Perhaps its because I relate to this feeling and you did a good job of describing it.

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Marieta Maglas 19 November 2009

In thinking I could fill this emptiness nice confessional poem 10

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