Monotonous Life Poem by Judy Jones

Monotonous Life

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My life is void of optimism
I have become empty
At times
you can see can see Sadness quietly, curled up in a ball, in the corner
At other times
Anger rages through, ripping trees out
from their roots

Such a long, tedious process
Trying to fool yourself
In thinking I could fill this emptiness
But instead
It leaves a more vast hollowness

So here I monotonously continue on
What else can I do?
Hope is so foolish
Yet at the end of each day
I close my eyes
and wish this to be the last time I have to close them

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I thought it was awsome even though it is written with a stain of sadness. Perhaps its because I relate to this feeling and you did a good job of describing it.

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Marieta Maglas 19 November 2009

In thinking I could fill this emptiness nice confessional poem 10

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