Monday, August 6, 2012

More Snow.... (Will Fall) Comments

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this body has to die,
to decompose back into earth,
for this spirit to step free,
and remember who it 'is'...
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Eric Cockrell
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 August 2012

Yes, in the end, what be left but ashes for urns...and stains from our immortality, like trees lose leaaf and bark(nice parallel) but nature will cover those stains with the purity of snow...and we, will have our sins forgiven with Gods cover of absolution. I like this poem, Eric, and the its very well placed underpinning message delivered with astute metaphor.

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