Mother Is Mother Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Mother Is Mother



She's like none other
And father's father,
That makes all others.
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Haikus | 01.06.18 |

Thursday, January 3, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: father,mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 January 2019

A brilliantly penned haiku. It captures the two most important persons in a family that ensures the continuity of mankind. Well crafted and conveyed..

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 January 2019

Thanks for your feedback, But if I rewrite this Haiku as under, Mother is mother, Father, , no more than father, They make all others, what would you say?

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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