Monday, April 28, 2008

Motivated Monotony Comments

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Her branches limply swayed in the wind
The atmosphere around her swirled
Her thoughts took her to distant places
Roots anchored her to an immobile world
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Theresa Ann Moore
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Thad Wilk 28 April 2008

Beautiful poem Theresa, thought provoking, everything has a reason for being! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Abha Sharma 28 April 2008

i liked the way the poem from gloominess turned into a new world of freshness... the nature imagery...depicts the monotony and then the freshness so well

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Broken Peaces 28 April 2008

That was really lovely so easy to read and absolute joy 10 Chris x

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Theresa Ann Moore

Theresa Ann Moore

Michigan, U.S.A.
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