Motive Behind Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Motive Behind

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End of long summer gives respite
The heat has taken heavy toll with no delight
The medium or heavy showers make it all
Children and elders come out with cheerful call

Yes any long spell invites saturation
It raises frustration with lot many questions
Body rejects quick call and tries to escape
It wants to relax and tries to offer new shape

The week ends are meant to offer some change
The person should try to convert it into joy and manage
It must be utilized with children and family
As week long fatigue has worn you out already

Ask for some change and if not, go for sleep
Mind should always be left free
No worry or tension should take over
At least two days are offered to recover

Yes there is motive behind
You may always find
The change is necessary for life style
Try honestly and enjoy meanwhile

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

End of long summer gives respite The heat has taken heavy toll with no delight

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 April 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 8 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

nice Rebecca - Becky Tecson23 minutes ago very artiscally expressed thank God for weekends huh Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

Nice Mallika Dhar24 minutes ago Good Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 April 2014

Has good points but bad grammar. Josh Byrd19 minutes ago I think he is making valid points about life. Needs to work on grammar a bit though I think.

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Kevin Patrick 03 April 2014

I like the message of this, its within us to change ourselves for the better, we should be able to relax a rightful mind leads to rightful peace, thank you this is a lovely work. Great philosophy

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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