Moving On Poem by nathan chilton

Moving On

Rating: 5.0


The time has come to move on,
To start a new adventure.
It's a new part of my life,
Which will help me to decide my future.

I have choson the direction i want to move in,
I have made a decision.
Through things that have happened,
with this knowledge i can help others.

By nathan chilton

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 March 2010

have choson the direction i want to move in, I have made a decision. Through things that have happened, with this knowledge i can help others. how beautiful assertive lines are reflected here. it is nice to have resolution to do something in life and take the decision.. lovely lines to read.....10 read mine... i miss..., miss i miss u.... love at first sight

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Jappane Human 03 April 2009

GrEaT wOrK Nathan! ! ! :) xJx

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Yelena M. 01 April 2009

This one is well-penned and positive! Keep on writing and sharing here! Best wishes. A.

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Annie Girl 30 March 2009

real nice....i like it alot

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I agree with Fiona, Nathan, you are making a good start. Look forward to reading some more!

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