You Are My Love Poem by nathan chilton

You Are My Love

Rating: 5.0


when you are with me,
where ever we go,
it is so sweet.

when you are with me,
is make's me happy,
what can we do?
you are my love.

if you are not here,
it feels like i can not breathe,
and it proves my love is strong,
for you.

when your hair shines,
my eyes light up,
my heart gose fast,
don't leave me in the past.

in our futuer i won't be here,
i am leaving soon,
i know it's hard.

with all my love it's time to go.

with love your best man

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 21 April 2009

hahahaha ok I think it's nice but you got to tell her more

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Fiona Davidson 21 April 2009

A very cute write Nathan...your girl will love it...10++

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Yelena M. 21 April 2009

A very sincere write, Nathan, I really like..And I agree with Eyan..you got to tell her more: -) Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you. Amary.

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Antonio Liao 23 April 2009

Nathan my dear...if your in love....no amount of words can say, the love that you felt.... words is not even enough to say..the I do...the day becomes the night and night becomes the day....its memory to remember and a date to forget...you have a very beautiufl poem...thank you and God bless....a 10++++

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Dagmara Anna 30 April 2009

Sweet poem. Love is beautiful. Yeeessss, very. I wish you great love :) DA

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rago rago 29 April 2009

a moon lit words, , , , , , , , .......10 ++++

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Anjali Sinha 28 April 2009

wowwwwwww lovely these sweet nothings lights up my eyes too -10 anjali

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Eyan Desir 27 April 2009

Very sweet Dear poet full marks

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~ Jon London ~ 24 April 2009

Speak your heart to her, love has many words and many meanings, let her hear them all my friend. Keep up the great work

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