The Stars Poem by nathan chilton
The Stars
The stars are up high they dance in the sky,
but only at night they shine very bright and by,
day they vanish from site.
we know that the're there hanging up in the air,
my feelings for you are solid and true,
so why do i constantly feel troubled and blue.
I agree with Catrina...Just needs a few editing work, then it's all good!
it was a nice poem indeed, though really need a few editing to make the beauty of the poem come out truly...Thanks!
good.... a few mispelled words but other than that excellent work
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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i like the emotion of this poem i feel connected :)