Monday, March 30, 2009

The Stars

The stars are up high they dance in the sky,
but only at night they shine very bright and by,
day they vanish from site.

we know that the're there hanging up in the air,
my feelings for you are solid and true,
so why do i constantly feel troubled and blue.
nathan chilton
i like the emotion of this poem i feel connected :)
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Jappane Human 03 April 2009
I agree with Catrina...Just needs a few editing work, then it's all good!
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Catrina Heart 02 April 2009
it was a nice poem indeed, though really need a few editing to make the beauty of the poem come out truly...Thanks!
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Annie Girl 30 March 2009
good.... a few mispelled words but other than that excellent work
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