Mum Poem by nathan chilton

Mum

Rating: 5.0


A mum is always for you,
from the day you were born,
and she is there for you,
when you are down or need help.
even you are older(which is never,
because you are always her baby) .

If you are having problems,
and cannot speak to anyone,
but mum is there 24/7 even,
she has gone.

But a mum is a wonderful person,
to be with and a person you should,
repect for ever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 21 April 2009

Nice poem with some errors 2 line should b From the day you were born 3 line and she is there for you 7 line and cannot speak to any one

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Fiona Davidson 21 April 2009

Bit of editing needed as Eyan says...but nonetheless a great write and tribute to your Mum...10++

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Natalie Bebbington 17 May 2009

hi hun, love the poem

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Dagmara Anna 30 April 2009

Lovely poem about mum, I like it.

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Annie Girl 28 April 2009

a mother is one u gives u life....love this poem.....

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Stewie Johnson 22 April 2009

lots of heart in that write really nice mate. All mums would be proud of that! : -)

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Yelena M. 21 April 2009

Your mother should be proud of you, Nathan..Thanks for sharing this warm tribute :) Best wishes. Amary.

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