Monday, September 29, 2008

Munching Comments

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in betwen lunching and supper
there is munching,
in between supper and a midnight snack
the mandibles are busy
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shimon weinroth
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David Threadgold 29 September 2008

Hi Shimon. This one makes me feel less hungry somehow. well done Regards Dave T

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Indira Renganathan 29 September 2008

Sensibly thought provoking..good flow of language..lovely poem indeed..kindly go through my poem 'simply couplets-1'..a little similar to yours and other poems also when time permits..thank you

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