poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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Music Band

Music band still plays and hold good as part of procession
Everybody prefer their presence in the opening up of session
They are still good at playing old music with famous tunes
It is general belief that good beginning brings the fortune

I heard from distance lovely music of band
May be they were the people dancing in marriage of friend
It approached the street blaring tunes from the far end
Wife was near and caught me mildly with the hold of hand

We both were happy and slipped in to old memory
it was cause of great concern at that time and matter of worry
I had happily consented and agreed to marry
Promised all the way to adhere to the responsibility and carry

The days Passed off easily like water flow
So peaceful, calm and quiet with maturity to grow
No worry, tension but ready to accept natural blow
Growth was fast but I kept pace little slow

She had never become so emotional
Held my hand with grip and intentional
She wanted to say thanks with little sparkle
Her grace was unique and very remarkable

Do you have anything specific in mind?
Do you want me something to find?
“No” came an answer from her with little tears
Separation at any time was cause of worry with fears

why are you thinking on those irrelevant matter?
Are you not well and feeling better? I asked
“I think but on different lines” was her answer
I have no clue but to offer suggestions fewer

What if, you and I are separated never?
Do you think it can happen in our life ever?
How one can or may get along in world?
Relation with all may freeze and get cold

This sudden Volvo from her sent shiver in spine
First time I felt it may prove true and she was not going to be mine
Was her indication real for sudden departure?
Was the fear for future was unwarranted and immature?

I failed to catch nerves and grasp her real intention
never before she has made any such mention
this proved as something new and bolt from the blue
I wondered and tried to know but found no clue

It gifted me many sleepless nights
was she correct in her own way and right?
I wondered but soon felt warmth in her hand
Music was dying away with passing of band

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 28, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 17, 2011

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (2/25/2010 2:35:00 AM)

    FAST BACK WHEELIG DOWN THE MEMORY LANE…IN MIDST A TWIST GOSH!

    ‘…Relation with all may freeze and get cold…’

    SUCH ANTICLIMAX ADDS CALORIE TO POETIC QUALITY AND IT WAS NEEDED AND YOU JUXTAPOSED VERY NICELY…AND WELL TIMED A WINNER SIXER!
    10
    MS. NIVEITA
    UK

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  • Sulochna Pandit (9/19/2009 9:16:00 PM)

    heard from distance music of band
    May be people dancing in marriage of friend
    It approached the street at the end
    Wife near by caught mildly the hold of hand

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  • Jigisha Vyas (9/15/2009 10:06:00 PM)

    Do have anything special in mind?
    You want me something to find?
    “No” came an answer with little tears

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  • Maulin Shah (8/16/2009 10:07:00 PM)

    lovely music athey have....10

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  • Radha Seth (8/15/2009 8:41:00 AM)

    music is always pleasent....10

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  • Saroj Davde (8/15/2009 8:36:00 AM)

    it has its own class....10

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  • Kamli Kamal (8/13/2009 10:23:00 PM)

    it is different poem....10

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  • Santoksingh Jadeja (8/11/2009 9:55:00 PM)

    it is very good pome n enjoyable....10

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  • Ratna Patel (7/29/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    This sudden Volvo sent shiver in spine
    First time I felt she was not mine
    ..it puzzles us some time with unexpected questions.....10

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  • Kamlesh Ambalal (7/28/2009 11:33:00 PM)

    Do have anything special in mind?
    she may be thinking something special in mind...10

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  • Bharati Bhikhubhai (7/28/2009 11:27:00 PM)

    May be people dancing in marriage of friend
    It approached the street at the end
    we enjoy music in the band....10

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  • Sejal Kapadia (7/28/2009 11:25:00 PM)

    wondered and felt warmth in her hand
    Sound was dying away with passing of band
    very good sentimental and touchy poem....10

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  • Pittle Shaileja (7/28/2009 11:20:00 PM)

    Passed all these days like water flow
    time went off so easily///10

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  • Ritul Soni (7/28/2009 11:14:00 PM)

    Do have anything special in mind?
    You want me something to find?
    she must have something in mind...10

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  • Chand Shikari (7/28/2009 11:09:00 PM)

    had happily agreed to marry
    Promised all the way responsibility to carry
    oldie goodie talk...10

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  • Bhanubhai Montu Shah (7/28/2009 10:57:00 PM)

    Her grace was unique and remarkable
    true feelings...10

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  • Pradip Pillai (7/28/2009 10:49:00 PM)

    Why are thinking on those irrelevant matter?
    irrelevent thinking sometimes...10

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  • Trevor William (7/28/2009 10:42:00 PM)

    We both slipped in to old memory...confusion all over...10

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  • Dalsukh S (7/28/2009 10:35:00 PM)

    No” came an answer with little tears
    Separation at some time was cause of worry and fears
    sad signal from her....10

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  • Vinod Karmakar (7/28/2009 10:29:00 PM)

    III heard from distance music of band
    May be people dancing in marriage of friend
    It approached the.........
    could not guess her...10

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