Muskaantereesome Poet Or Tess Reviewed My Poemnice Attemptbut Bywho? Poem by me poet yeps poet

Muskaantereesome Poet Or Tess Reviewed My Poemnice Attemptbut Bywho?

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Teri halki see muskurahat
Jane ketnoon ko karegi ghayal


Kya ilm bhi hai aapko
Kitne ke jaan kurbaan ho chuki
Bas tere ek muskaan se.

Na jane kab aur kaise
Hum be ho gaye fida
Teri uss muskaan pe.

Jaan to hum bhi chidakte hai
Aapke uss kemti muskaan pe
Jo na jaane kab meri jindagi ban gaye...

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Monday, August 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: laughter,poem
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 August 2020

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Byaan karna mushkil hai Bakhan karna khatam nahi hoti Jane mujhe kya ho gaya Bas teri muskaan he dikhta Chahe din ho ya raat Dhoop ho ya chaaoon Sab ek lagne laga hai Jabse aap se mulakat hua hai. Good attempt. Full of emotions

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Varsha M 24 August 2020

Byaan karna mushkil hai Bakhan karna khatam nahi hoti Jane mujhe kya ho gaya Bas teri muskaan he dikhta Chahe din ho ya raat Dhoop ho ya chaaoon Sab ek lagne laga hai Jabse aap se mulakat hua hai. Good attempt. Full of emotions.

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me poet yeps poet 24 August 2020

I am in love with Rain, Varsha.

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