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Mom's Smiles - Poem by me poet yeps poet

Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
no tears....
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away

it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I my mom can see
smiling with me

It does no longer rain
now it only snows
heaven knows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming?
I smile back and ask
Are you still waiting for me?

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Mom's Smiles by me poet yeps poet

  • Jez Brul (7/15/2019 6:28:00 PM)

    such a delicate poem..gentle and heart-touching.10+++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (7/10/2019 12:28:00 AM)

    A great poem! My pleasure reading this brilliant work time and again! (Report)Reply

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  • Martina Moriarty Mc Carthy (7/3/2019 7:52:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem...very thoughtful and moving! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Nancy Chambers (6/22/2019 12:44:00 PM)

    Nice remembrance of your mother. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/21/2019 10:14:00 AM)

    Outstanding. Just impeccable in every sense. anjandev roy. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K Swain (6/19/2019 6:42:00 AM)

    A great poem my friend! You have put all your love and emotion into your ink to construct such a lovely poem! My great pleasure revisiting it! (Report)Reply

    The Poet Poet(6/19/2019 11:46:00 AM)

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  • Jane Campion (6/10/2019 9:08:00 PM)

    What a beautifully sensitive poem dear friend. (Report)Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (6/10/2019 4:09:00 PM)

    Beautiful words expressed. Your poem puts the fear of death at ease. (Report)Reply

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  • Rudra Mondal (6/4/2019 10:04:00 AM)

    Add to my poem list....thanks (Report)Reply

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  • Rudra Mondal (6/4/2019 10:02:00 AM)

    The best poem in the poemhunter....thanks..
    10++++++
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  • Aniruddha Pathak (6/2/2019 12:12:00 AM)

    A poem made beautiful by its unanticipated turns brilliantly carried out, my dear Poet's Poet. (Report)Reply

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  • Michael Hopkins (5/29/2019 5:11:00 AM)

    Yes, all those you have loved, human and animal will be waiting upon your arrival. Nice poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Joan Xie (5/22/2019 7:20:00 PM)

    I will read this poem to my mom, she is over eighty now and lives alone. Thank you! (Report)Reply

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  • Beena Antony (5/18/2019 11:06:00 AM)

    Touching poem....Mother's love is the purest love that one can experience. No bond so strong in the entire world. Some mothers are loved and some rejected...I miss my mother too. (Report)Reply

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  • Ruma Chaudhuri (5/15/2019 9:21:00 AM)

    Reading your poem and tears coming to my eyes. My mother is old. So I am afraid of that day. So almost every night I think about her and can't sleep.
    Very touchy poem.
    Very nice too.
    The last four lines....

    " when she calls out to me
    when are you coming?
    I smile back and ask
    Are you still waiting for me? .."
    Specially touching my heart.
    Best wishes..
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  • Nassy Fesharaki (5/14/2019 6:38:00 PM)

    Great feeling and devotion. (Report)Reply

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  • Malabika Ray (5/13/2019 3:26:00 PM)

    Touched by the words and thoughts in your beautiful poem! (Report)Reply

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  • Meethi Mondal (5/4/2019 11:37:00 AM)

    It does no longer rain
    now it only snows
    heaven knows
    when she calls out to me
    when are you coming?
    I smile back and ask
    Are you still waiting for me..
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  • Meethi Mondal (5/4/2019 11:37:00 AM)

    it rains till today
    nearly five decades away
    she still smiles daily at me
    I my mom can see
    smiling with me
    ...
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  • Meethi Mondal (5/4/2019 11:36:00 AM)

    Very sentimental poetry....
    I recall my mom’s last eyes....
    no tears....
    Smiles as she passed by
    tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
    Then it rained all day and night
    mom’s smiles went away
    now I thirst for those looks till today
    as she passed away
    (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015



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