Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away
it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I my mom can see
smiling with me
It does no longer rain
now it only snows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming?
I smile back and ask
Are you still waiting for me?
Emotional poem. A poem with high voltage and current from heart, no one can go without the tears in eyes.1000******** Revisit is always a pleasure to read this treasure..
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Excellent job with vivid imagery.
SO KIND OF U TC SORRY SO BELATED
Eyes that smile! Even the eyes of your own mother. I'll smile with the both of you!
SO KIND OF UU SMILEE MAY UUUUUUUUUUUU R L
A lovely poem! ....it rains till today /nearly five decades away /she still smiles daily at me/I my mom can see / smiling with me...appreciate the brilliant piece of work dear poet!
u must b more brilliant than me... to judge brilliance in me...so i thank thee Dr DKS rgds