Mom's Smiles Poem by me poet yeps poet

Mom's Smiles

Rating: 4.6


Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
no tears....
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away

it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I my mom can see
smiling with me

It does no longer rain
now it only snows
heaven knows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming?
I smile back and ask
Are you still waiting for me?

Monday, November 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 29 November 2017

A lovely poem! ....it rains till today /nearly five decades away /she still smiles daily at me/I my mom can see / smiling with me...appreciate the brilliant piece of work dear poet!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 November 2017

u must b more brilliant than me... to judge brilliance in me...so i thank thee Dr DKS rgds

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M Asim Nehal 15 May 2021

Emotional poem. A poem with high voltage and current from heart, no one can go without the tears in eyes.1000******** Revisit is always a pleasure to read this treasure..

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me poet yeps poet 19 February 2022

YOU SIR ARE A GOLD IN MY MINDS LIBRARY GREAT POET YE BE

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Kevin Patrick 06 May 2021

A Beautiful well crafted work, the sentiment is universal, the loss of a mother is in essence a death within us. This is raw and emotional, it makes me think of my loved once, The closing is haunting as it is beautiful.

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Adeeb AlFateh 13 April 2026

Love of a mom is the ultimate source of surviving for every child; it's a really sentimental writing // superb poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 August 2023

Dear Poet, Congratulations! How are you getting?

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Prabir Gayen 16 April 2023

How are you?

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me poet yeps poet 21 March 2023

Why no one else is now commenting tell me

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me poet yeps poet 19 March 2023

Why no ore comments being posted now

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