Mom's Smiles Poem by me poet yeps poet

Mom's Smiles

Rating: 4.5


Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
no tears....
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away

it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I my mom can see
smiling with me

It does no longer rain
now it only snows
heaven knows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming?
I smile back and ask
Are you still waiting for me?

Monday, November 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 29 November 2017

A lovely poem! ....it rains till today /nearly five decades away /she still smiles daily at me/I my mom can see / smiling with me...appreciate the brilliant piece of work dear poet!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 November 2017

u must b more brilliant than me... to judge brilliance in me...so i thank thee Dr DKS rgds

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M Asim Nehal 15 May 2021

Emotional poem. A poem with high voltage and current from heart, no one can go without the tears in eyes.1000******** Revisit is always a pleasure to read this treasure..

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me poet yeps poet 19 February 2022

YOU SIR ARE A GOLD IN MY MINDS LIBRARY GREAT POET YE BE

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Smith is Swain is Smith

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Gayatri Phukan 07 April 2022

Beautiful writing

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Gayatri Phukan 07 April 2022

Beautifuly drawing

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me poet yeps poet 23 March 2022

THANK YOU SOMEONE MUST RAISE THE LEVEL

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Bharati Nayak 04 January 2022

So poignant and so beautiful!

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me poet yeps poet 19 February 2022

KINDNESS MA'AM

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