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Mom's Smiles

Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
no tears....
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away

it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I my mom can see
smiling with me

It does no longer rain
now it only snows
heaven knows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming?
I smile back and ask
Are you still waiting for me?

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (10/26/2020 10:29:00 AM)

    UPS AND DOWNS IN ALL LIVES

    ARE CYCLIC THIS POEM GOES HIGH
    THEN RETURNS

    UPPPP AND DOWNNNNNS
    LIKE A SWING
    SO READ IT AND BE HAPPY MOMMY IS NOW CALLING I AM WAITING FOR THE OPENING OF THE UNIVERSAL AIR FLYING OPENING TILL THEN I SHALL KEEP WAITING HOLD ON MOMMY

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (10/25/2020 2:57:00 PM)

    421/500 poem hip hips hoooooooooooooorayyyyyyyyyyyyy

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  • Yiyan HanYiyan Han (10/20/2020 9:54:00 AM)

    Heart feeling of every mom's smiles with 5*

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  • Prem Nizar Hameed (10/17/2020 3:19:00 AM)

    Very touching poem. Thank you for sharing.10-star

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    Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet(10/19/2020 9:39:00 AM)

    thanks PNH TNXXXXXXX PNNNNNNNNHHHHHHHHHHHHH PPPPPPNNNNNNNNNNNNHHHHHHHHHHH

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (10/16/2020 9:07:00 AM)

    now 393 /500 thanks to all readers for their BLESSINGS

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (10/14/2020 8:53:00 PM)

    now it 393/500
    PH SAYS SO

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (10/14/2020 8:52:00 PM)

    thank you ph ph ph for for upping it now to 393/500 pl ease don't blow it

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (10/13/2020 2:43:00 PM)

    this poem was last rated as 422 now no where what does PH teleprinter do
    who can ask who would you

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (9/30/2020 2:23:00 PM)

    .....This poem is still on top 500 Poems, on # 458 dear Poet! I am glad for you.
    That is TODAY Wednesday 30 Sep 2020.
    Hope you can find that, on page 19 (nineteen)

    It is still a heartwarming poem, an immortal poem for sure, poet yeps poet Sir.
    Heart touching for all women who love their mother and because they are no more now.
    5 Stars

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (9/30/2020 2:18:00 PM)

    This poem is still on top 500 Poems, on # 458 dear Poet! I am glad for you.
    That is TODAY Wednesday 30 Sep 2020.
    Hope you can find that, on page 19 (nineteen)

    It is still a heartwarming poem, an immortal poem for sure, poet yeps poet Sir.
    Heart touching for all women who love their mother and because they are no more now.
    5 Stars.

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (9/30/2020 1:25:00 PM)

    This poem is still on top 500 Poems, on # 458 dear Poet! I am glad for you.
    That is TODAY wednesday 30 Sep 2020. Hope you can find that, on page 19 (nineteen)
    It is still a heartwarming poem, an immortal poem for sure, poet yeps poet Sir.
    Heart touching for all women who love their mother and because they are no more now.
    5 Stars.

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  • Suresh Kumar EkSuresh Kumar Ek (9/21/2020 6:16:00 AM)

    the poem is worth reading again and again.
    Five decades of rain
    From the heart.
    mother will always smile atbyou
    But don't be in a haste to meet her soon.

    suresh

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  • Suresh Kumar EkSuresh Kumar Ek (9/17/2020 2:57:00 AM)

    heartfelt motherly poem, added to my favourites

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (9/5/2020 8:16:00 PM)

    ......THANK YOU ALL GOOD POETS PALS AND WELL WISHERS AND FRIENDS

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (9/5/2020 8:16:00 PM)

    HELLO GOOD ONES
    THANK YOU ALL GOOD POETS PALS AND WELL WISHERS AND FRIENDS

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  • Dr Shakira NandiniDr Shakira Nandini (9/4/2020 3:58:00 PM)

    Brilliant. I can swear that your poetry has come from the depths of my heart. Your poem brought tears to my eyes because I missed my mother because of your poem.
    10+++

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  • Buddy Bee Anthony (8/29/2020 12:23:00 AM)

    Mourning is loss. I appreciate how you can share your painful loss of your mother in a thoughtful poem. In the second stanza, did you mean, I can see my mom smiling at me? Just curious. English is my first language. So, I try to assist when i can. Peace...

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (8/5/2020 6:06:00 PM)

    A great piece of poetry! This poem will always fill your pen with a powerful invisible ink dear poet! I find enormous pleasure in this endearing poem time and again! Work of art... timeless!

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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (7/26/2020 3:44:00 AM)

    It does no longer rain
    now it only snows
    heaven knows
    when she calls out to me
    when are you coming?
    I smile back and ask
    Are you still waiting for me..../// Sweet dreams

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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (7/26/2020 3:43:00 AM)

    it rains till today
    nearly five decades away
    she still smiles daily at me
    I my mom can see
    smiling with me....so sweet dear poet..//

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