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Mom's Smiles - Poem by me poet yeps poet

Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
no tears....
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away

it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I my mom can see
smiling with me

It does no longer rain
now it only snows
heaven knows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming?
I smile back and ask
Are you still waiting for me?

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Mom's Smiles by me poet yeps poet

  • Rajnish Manga (5/19/2018 10:33:00 AM)


    This is my third recorded visit to this poem which has been received by its readers with great love and respect. I too have been impressed by this emotional saga of a broken heart of a son whose wails for his mother have not stopped even after so many years after losing her in this life. I am inclined to translate it into Hindi for which I have got your permission. Many Many Thanks to You, Dear Poet Friend. (Report) Reply

    (5/19/2018 1:02:00 PM)

    Sir you shower perfumed rain in my eyes this 50th year since she never died but passed by
    Thanks to you o great poet and FRIEND

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  • Chandan Dey (5/18/2018 1:01:00 PM)


    .Yes, it's a very sentimental poetry. The question put at the end indicates the strength of bond between son and mom. I'm really moved reading this poem. Thank you very much for sharing this beautiful poem with us..10 (Report) Reply

    (5/19/2018 1:08:00 PM)

    MY LIFE stands completed by reading comments of' sympathy and empathy.'' May all MOMS never die- - coz we as humans only EVERLASTING love ''MOM'S SMILES AND LOVING EYES

  • The Poet Poet (5/12/2018 2:30:00 PM)


    NOW KINDLY READ THIS ADDED ONE

    Fiftieth Anniversary Mommy -
    So kind of you all
    hope more will love it
    like you do

    MY MOM ALSO SMILES AT YOU
    (Report) Reply

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (5/11/2018 12:32:00 AM)


    Smiles as she passed by/tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled! Really, a sentimental piece of poetry! Appreciate the depth of expression loaded with love and emotion! Loved reading it again! (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (5/12/2018 2:04:00 PM)

    So kind of you doc DKS hope more will love i like you do This year she would have been in heaven or where ever for total complete 50 years mid year Maw she still be in waiting for a son like me who still loves her so muchly and perhaps in a year or two may be in her arms hopefully where ever she may still still be

  • Rajendra Rout (5/10/2018 7:57:00 AM)


    it rains till today
    nearly five decades away
    she still smiles daily at me
    I my mom can see
    smiling with me
    Lovely line i enjoy this poem
    💯++++++
    (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (5/10/2018 12:46:00 PM)

    DEAR R AND R
    I some how admire you
    must be a young man too
    living out in the blue
    where ru

    compose more ROMANTIC POETRY WILL YOU
    many more would love you

  • Jez Brul (5/8/2018 10:46:00 PM)


    a very heart warming poem..thank you for sharing...10++++ (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (5/9/2018 11:37:00 AM)

    kindness for your graciousness JB

  • The Poet Poet (5/8/2018 2:34:00 PM)


    MY 125 COMMENTS THANS ALL THE PLUME AND more I will thank too as you read me too Okay in advance tank you (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (5/1/2018 2:23:00 PM)


    ALL SIRS...OF PH..HEAR And here.and only because of you ALL Sirs I and my poetry survive..but for you I'd be nowhere o poet''''''....EK BAAR phir muskarao '''Khoobsoorat seee woh kali... aangaan mein hai abhee bhee khailtee...muskurati chull- bully... komal hai woh kalee...aaj bhee - - Gulab kee tarh laaal surkh see... hai meireee bahon mein woh dill kee kallee bhalle - - aaj bhee ...shukra hai ek shyaam aour khusshhee sey tullleee. (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (5/1/2018 2:22:00 PM)


    SIRS....and only because of you ALL Sirs I and my poetry survive..but for you I'd be nowhere o poet''''''....EK BAAR phir muskarao '''Khoobsoorat seee woh kali... aangaan mein hai abhee bhee khailtee...muskurati chull- bully... komal hai woh kalee...aaj bhee - - Gulab kee tarh laaal surkh see... hai meireee bahon mein woh dill kee kallee bhalle - - aaj bhee ...shukra hai ek shyaam aour khusshhee sey tullleee. (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (5/1/2018 2:12:00 PM)


    and this is my life's mission poetry
    thanks all readers you share my love with me
    for my MOM
    SHE was mom of all
    (Report) Reply

  • (4/12/2018 10:26:00 PM)


    Ever So Strongly Moving, Heart Felt Poem! ! ! ! !
    Thank You Again Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !
    Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
    (Report) Reply

    Rajendra Rout (5/10/2018 8:00:00 AM)

    I agree with you Rebecca Navarre

    The Poet Poet (5/1/2018 2:14:00 PM)

    thank you ma'am for sharing my love with my mom
    EK BAAR phir muskarao '''Khoobsoorat seee woh kali... aangaan mein hai abhee bhee khailtee...muskurati chull- bully... komal hai woh kalee...aaj bhee - - Gulab kee tarh laaal surkh see... hai meireee bahon mein woh dill kee kallee bhalle - - aaj bhee ...shukra hai ek shyaam aour khusshhee sey tullleee

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (3/23/2018 7:53:00 AM)


    A thought provoking poem that carries loads of love and affection! Your recall to your mom’s last eyes is the pulsating expression! I find a lot of interest revisiting these kind of poems! (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (5/1/2018 2:16:00 PM)

    but for you I'd be nowhere o poet''''''....EK BAAR phir muskarao '''Khoobsoorat seee woh kali... aangaan mein hai abhee bhee khailtee...muskurati chull- bully... komal hai woh kalee...aaj bhee - - Gulab kee tarh laaal surkh see... hai meireee bahon mein woh dill kee kallee bhalle - - aaj bhee ...shukra hai ek shyaam aour khusshhee sey tullleee

    The Poet Poet (5/1/2018 2:15:00 PM)

    and its ur kindness sir poetEK BAAR phir muskarao '''Khoobsoorat seee woh kali... aangaan mein hai abhee bhee khailtee...muskurati chull- bully... komal hai woh kalee...aaj bhee - - Gulab kee tarh laaal surkh see... hai meireee bahon mein woh dill kee kallee bhalle - - aaj bhee ...shukra hai ek shyaam aour khusshhee sey tullleee

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/15/2018 2:06:00 AM)


    This poem frequently provokes thought and brings emotion. Mothers love remain in memory. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned and revisiting this poem values more...10 (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (5/1/2018 2:18:00 PM)

    and only because of you sir I and my poetry survive..but for you I'd be nowhere o poet''''''....EK BAAR phir muskarao '''Khoobsoorat seee woh kali... aangaan mein hai abhee bhee khailtee...muskurati chull- bully... komal hai woh kalee...aaj bhee - - Gulab kee tarh laaal surkh see... hai meireee bahon mein woh dill kee kallee bhalle - - aaj bhee ...shukra hai ek shyaam aour khusshhee sey tullleee.

  • (2/14/2018 11:08:00 AM)


    Are you still waiting for me?
    Ended it beautifully indeed! ! !
    (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (5/8/2018 2:38:00 PM)

    sorry sir and kindness just read ur comment then I did not come to know neither did you your then glamour show now I you very well know...

  • The Poet Poet (1/1/2018 2:20:00 AM)


    HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL MOM SENT SMILES TO ALL (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (12/26/2017 12:30:00 PM)


    thank you all for promoting my bestest poem Moms Smiles (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (12/26/2017 6:11:00 AM)


    Such a beautiful and heart warming write. Mother’s love and smile is something that never leaves our heart. I do hope you get your profile problems fixed. (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (12/26/2017 12:27:00 PM)

    KINDNESS Savita ji I could enter today again great feelings so many missed me

  • (12/14/2017 12:31:00 PM)


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  • (12/14/2017 4:58:00 AM)


    A very touching poem that moistens my eyes. Loved it with my heart and mind.

    tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
    Then it rained all day and night
    (Report) Reply

    (12/26/2017 12:26:00 PM)

    SO KIND OF YOU TO APPRECIATE MY BEST EVER POEM HOPE MANY MORE WILL READ IT SOME DAY IT MAY BE INCLUDED AS BEST POEM OF THE DAY AND WTHIN FIRST 500 ALL HERE SAY THANX POET

    (12/14/2017 12:29:00 PM)

    sorRy am haviNg difficulty entering my PH PROFILE... RU ALSO... FIRE FOX SAYS THIS SITE SHOULD BE HTTPS BUT IT IS ONLY HTTP ..INSECURE..WHAT HAVE U TO ADVISE PLEASE.
    ANY WAY THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS

  • (12/6/2017 2:25:00 AM)


    Sentimental indeed...with a heart for mothers! (Report) Reply

    (12/14/2017 12:30:00 PM)

    OOOOOOOOOOOOOsorRy am haviNg difficulty entering my PH PROFILE... RU ALSO... FIRE FOX SAYS THIS SITE SHOULD BE HTTPS BUT IT IS ONLY HTTP ..INSECURE..WHAT HAVE U TO ADVISE PLEASE THANX THOUGH

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015



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