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Mom's Smiles - Poem by me poet yeps poet

Very sentimental poetry....
I recall my mom’s last eyes....
no tears....
Smiles as she passed by
tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
Then it rained all day and night
mom’s smiles went away
now I thirst for those looks till today
as she passed away

it rains till today
nearly five decades away
she still smiles daily at me
I my mom can see
smiling with me

It does no longer rain
now it only snows
heaven knows
when she calls out to me
when are you coming?
I smile back and ask
Are you still waiting for me?

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Mom's Smiles by me poet yeps poet

  • The Poet Poet (1/1/2018 2:20:00 AM)


    HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL MOM SENT SMILES TO ALL (Report) Reply

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  • The Poet Poet (12/26/2017 12:30:00 PM)


    thank you all for promoting my bestest poem Moms Smiles (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (12/26/2017 6:11:00 AM)


    Such a beautiful and heart warming write. Mother’s love and smile is something that never leaves our heart. I do hope you get your profile problems fixed. (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (12/26/2017 12:27:00 PM)

    KINDNESS Savita ji I could enter today again great feelings so many missed me

  • (12/14/2017 12:31:00 PM)


    sorRy am haviNg difficulty entering my PH PROFILE... RU ALSO... FIRE FOX SAYS THIS SITE SHOULD BE HTTPS BUT IT IS ONLY HTTP ..INSECURE..WHAT HAVE U TO ADVISE PLEASE (Report) Reply

  • (12/14/2017 4:58:00 AM)


    A very touching poem that moistens my eyes. Loved it with my heart and mind.

    tears did not then come into my eyes I too smiled
    Then it rained all day and night
    (Report) Reply

    (12/26/2017 12:26:00 PM)

    SO KIND OF YOU TO APPRECIATE MY BEST EVER POEM HOPE MANY MORE WILL READ IT SOME DAY IT MAY BE INCLUDED AS BEST POEM OF THE DAY AND WTHIN FIRST 500 ALL HERE SAY THANX POET

    (12/14/2017 12:29:00 PM)

    sorRy am haviNg difficulty entering my PH PROFILE... RU ALSO... FIRE FOX SAYS THIS SITE SHOULD BE HTTPS BUT IT IS ONLY HTTP ..INSECURE..WHAT HAVE U TO ADVISE PLEASE.
    ANY WAY THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS

  • (12/6/2017 2:25:00 AM)


    Sentimental indeed...with a heart for mothers! (Report) Reply

    (12/14/2017 12:30:00 PM)

    OOOOOOOOOOOOOsorRy am haviNg difficulty entering my PH PROFILE... RU ALSO... FIRE FOX SAYS THIS SITE SHOULD BE HTTPS BUT IT IS ONLY HTTP ..INSECURE..WHAT HAVE U TO ADVISE PLEASE THANX THOUGH

  • (11/29/2017 11:38:00 PM)


    A lovely poem! ....it rains till today /nearly five decades away /she still smiles daily at me/I my mom can see /
    smiling with me...appreciate the brilliant piece of work dear poet!
    (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (11/30/2017 7:04:00 AM)

    u must b more brilliant than me... to judge brilliance in me...so i thank thee Dr DKS rgds

  • Aqua Flower (11/29/2017 9:25:00 PM)


    Oh what a sweet write about mother. Your adoration resonates in remembering your mother's eyes! She smiles daily down at you! Love the lines you used and repetition and flow! What a beautiful write indeed! thank you for sharing this with me! (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (11/30/2017 7:05:00 AM)

    so kind oy you Aqua for your lovely comments they energise me
    thanks once again

  • Londis Carpenter (11/29/2017 7:41:00 AM)


    Oh who can write such great lines but you. Please continue to write on Poet. (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (11/29/2017 8:20:00 AM)

    and so kind of you to say such beautiful words too...

  • Christina Simmons (11/24/2017 6:32:00 AM)


    Our mothers we can never forget. Each one of us has/had the best mum. A very special woman. We are our mother. Well done dear poet. A beautiful write. (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (11/24/2017 8:31:00 AM)

    So thougtful and kind of you to say so Christina Regards

  • Rini Jerry (11/21/2017 8:54:00 AM)


    An heart felt poem about mothers smile (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (11/21/2017 11:57:00 AM)

    thank q RJ

  • Binayakumar Mohanty (11/17/2017 9:58:00 AM)


    I do understand your sentiment for your mother dear poet because I realise it and think as if this is Me with the same sentiment.
    It rains till today
    Nearly five decades away
    She smiles still daily at me
    .............
    it does no longer rain
    Now it only snows.
    Unparallel.Every mother can wait reciprocating.Thanks for sharing.
    (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (10/25/2017 11:38:00 AM)


    Mom’s Smiles and comment may be fist 500 poems of the world
    When deep love adores moments of life tear comes out automatically. During deepest of sorrows sometimes we do not get ear in eyes. Having love for mother very tenderly is tribute to her and this is affectionate. Separation with mom with appearance of her last eyes is seen and this is reflected. This is sentimental. Such a poem this is that brings deep emotion in mind of readers. Mom''s smiles are not visible these days. Still life''s journey continues but mom remains in deepest core of soul. A gift of smile is offered to her with prayer to God. We hope she will rest in peace by God''s grace.
    This is perfectly penned an outstanding poem and we hope this will get a crown place among top five hundred poems of the world one day. Wishing you all the best. May God bring happiness for you....10

    Dear poet
    Thank you very much. Your recommended poem, 'Mom's Smiles, ' I have already read along with few other poems and commented on them. You are a nice and genius poet. Wishing you all the best. May God bring happiness...10

    LOVE REGARDS AND MY BOWING THANKS TO ALL
    WITHOUT ALL OF YOU
    I AM JUST ANOTHER
    COMMA
    IN a LIFE

    Mom’s Smiles and comment may be fist 500 poems of the world
    When deep love adores moments of life tear comes out automatically. During deepest of sorrows sometimes we do not get ear in eyes. Having love for mother very tenderly is tribute to her and this is affectionate. Separation with mom with appearance of her last eyes is seen and this is reflected. This is sentimental. Such a poem this is that brings deep emotion in mind of readers. Mom''s smiles are not visible these days. Still life''s journey continues but mom remains in deepest core of soul. A gift of smile is offered to her with prayer to God. We hope she will rest in peace by God''s grace.
    This is perfectly penned an outstanding poem and we hope this will get a crown place among top five hundred poems of the world one day. Wishing you all the best. May God bring happiness for you....10

    Dear poet
    Thank you very much. Your recommended poem, 'Mom's Smiles, ' I have already read along with few other poems and commented on them. You are a nice and genius poet. Wishing you all the best. May God bring happiness...10
    (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/25/2017 9:27:00 AM)


    When deep love adores moments of life tear comes out automatically. During deepest of sorrows sometimes we do not get ear in eyes. Having love for mother very tenderly is tribute to her and this is affectionate. Separation with mom with appearance of her last eyes is seen and this is reflected. This is sentimental. Such a poem this is that brings deep emotion in mind of readers. Mom's smiles are not visible these days. Still life's journey continues but mom remains in deepest core of soul. A gift of smile is offered to her with prayer to God. We hope she will rest in peace by God's grace. This is perfectly penned an outstanding poem and we hope this will get a crown place among top five hundred poems of the world one day. Wishing you all the best. May God bring happiness for you....10 (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (10/25/2017 11:35:00 AM)

    IN reverence Sir I bow

  • Anil Kumar Panda (10/22/2017 5:57:00 AM)


    This is great poetry. The end is touching.Very nice.10+++ (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (10/22/2017 12:52:00 PM)

    kindness Anil ji

  • (10/21/2017 11:28:00 PM)


    Absolutely amazing! A mom's patience is eternal.... (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (10/22/2017 12:53:00 PM)

    so tis thanks still Lemons

  • Robert Murray Smith (10/21/2017 8:41:00 PM)


    A poem of great depth. Well penned.10

    Robert Murray Smith
    (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (10/21/2017 2:50:00 PM)


    Hello your views please

    ''MOMS SMILES''...
    Despite this being my best poem
    it will never get into the first 500 list

    the earlier guys got 10 points
    now PH has reduced it to 5

    It's like comparing bananas with apples
    wow
    sad no none has pointed this out though
    to Promoters of PH
    some one please do
    (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (10/21/2017 2:28:00 PM)


    Despite this being my best poem it wll never get into the first 500 list the earlier guys got 10 points now PH has reduced to 5 It's like comparing bananas with apples wow sad no none has pointed this out though to Promoters of PH (Report) Reply

  • (10/19/2017 1:04:00 AM)


    Dear poet, well written what a marvellous love! (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (10/19/2017 6:20:00 PM)

    Thank you Saji G P from where ru ji?

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 30, 2015



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