Lease Of Life Poem by me poet yeps poet

Lease Of Life

Rating: 3.4


Last night
I was feeling cold,
nearly dead
they said wake up
yesterday’s dinner is being laid

I asked to be served in bed

No you are not dead yet
wake up get dressed
and the car is on its way
we will go to Molina Rouge
your ribs
we will all eat

It gave me another lease
today I went to yet another free feast
and have added years to life
how many more years will be my strife?
can't wish it
but I will ask for more, ribs of animals and buttered chicken
as you want to make me live
so keep your purse well insured
and also save for charity to give

Saturday, December 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 23 May 2018

Lease of life is an adorable piece of poetry! No, we are not dead yet.......we will all eat.....Liked the stanza most! I vote this wonderful poem with a 10

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o so kind of you dear DrDKS You always raise my morale thanks som make others feel dull o what the some think too much about themselves can't be helped so many poems of mie have to be read as yet Thanks doc

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Akhtar Jawad 09 December 2015

A touching poem, life is a lease and when it's about to expire, and love love of dear ones renews it, it becomes pleasant once again.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 December 2015

ty tc gb u sir aj kindly grade it

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 December 2015

grade kindly aj

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me poet yeps poet 15 May 2021

GOOD POEM BUT LOW VOLTAGE BUILD IT UP PLEASE

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me poet yeps poet 20 April 2021

many have to read yet do

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me poet yeps poet 21 March 2021

OLD RATING BUT STILL BEST

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Varsha M 11 June 2020

Yeah feasting on other's purse is always delicious but living on once own money pleasures beyond quest. Try it once and see.

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Bharati Nayak 10 January 2019

No you are not dead yet wake up get dressed and the car is on its way we will go to Molina Rouge your ribs we will all eat - - - - - - Our loved ones keep us alive - - A nice theme expressed with humour.

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