me poet yeps poet


Lease Of Life - Poem by me poet yeps poet

Last night
I was feeling cold,
nearly dead
they said wake up
yesterday’s dinner is being laid

I asked to be served in bed

No you are not dead yet
wake up get dressed
and the car is on its way
we will go to Molina Rouge
your ribs
we will all eat

It gave me another lease
today I went to yet another free feast
and have added years to life
how many more years will be my strife?
can't wish it
but I will ask for more, ribs of animals and buttered chicken
as you want to make me live
so keep your purse well insured
and also save for charity to give

Topic(s) of this poem: life and death


Comments about Lease Of Life by me poet yeps poet

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (7/8/2018 7:31:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem on life and death nicely executed. I quote, .......
    No you are not dead yet
    wake up get dressed
    and the car is on its way
    we will go to Molina Rouge
    your ribs
    we will all eat
    Thanks for sharing.
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  • Lungelo S Mbuyazi (7/3/2018 3:15:00 PM)


    A nicely penned piece of craft work that is so thought provoking...I like it..10 I vote (Report) Reply

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (5/23/2018 5:03:00 AM)


    Lease of life is an adorable piece of poetry! No, we are not dead yet.......we will all eat.....Liked the stanza most! I vote this wonderful poem with a 10 (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (5/24/2018 7:41:00 PM)

    o so kind of you dear DrDKS You always raise my morale thanks som make others feel dull o what the some think too much about themselves can't be helped so many poems of mie have to be read as yet Thanks doc

  • Bri Edwards (5/22/2018 8:31:00 PM)


    interesting, but i want to look at one i may understand better, or one that at least has some humor/humour or in it. or MAYBE there IS humor here? i'm not sure.

    bri :)
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  • Oratile Diratsagae (5/11/2018 10:07:00 AM)


    A very nice piece. I am really interested in all of the lines. God bless you (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (4/14/2018 6:35:00 AM)


    116 HITS GIVES A POET A GREAT FEELING (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (4/2/2018 11:50:00 PM)


    Some sweet concern from others can always give us a new lease of life! When we express concern for the less privileged by opening our wallet and donating from it.... we give them a new lease of life! Beautifully put! (Report) Reply

  • The Poet Poet (10/23/2017 2:45:00 PM)


    THANKS ALL
    THOUGH BELATED
    I don't come to know who has said what and when
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  • (10/1/2017 7:44:00 AM)


    Funny profound philosophical original. And you made me hungry for buttered chicken. Great poem! (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (10/23/2017 2:44:00 PM)

    THANKS RW
    THOUGH BELATED
    I don't come to know who has said what and when

  • Rini Shibu (9/30/2017 12:43:00 PM)


    Went for another free lease
    Save for charity to give... Very different way of writing.. Impressive
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    The Poet Poet (9/30/2017 1:28:00 PM)

    kindness always pays we wake at will thanks for d reads so quick response admired it

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (9/14/2017 1:20:00 PM)


    It gave me another lease
    today I went to yet another free feast
    and have added years to life
    how many more years will be my strife?

    It's a great philosophical piece of poem, a charming poem.
    Loved it.
    Thanks a lot for the sharing,
    10++++
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  • Julie Smith (1/5/2017 2:22:00 PM)


    That's a great touching poem :) 10+ (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (1/5/2017 3:24:00 PM)

    thank you so much julie

  • Tapan M. Saren (8/3/2016 7:32:00 PM)


    Well well well.. It's a unique style to write a poetry! (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (8/3/2016 9:34:00 PM)

    yes i am unique
    we all are Tapan

  • Lyn Paul (1/9/2016 7:20:00 PM)


    Enjoy your drive to help charity Yet the amount of charities now out there is overwhelming.
    Thank You
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    The Poet Poet (1/9/2016 7:31:00 PM)

    kindness all my life i have given never asked

  • C. P. Sharma (1/5/2016 7:01:00 AM)


    I am immortal
    I shall never die
    I change forms
    That makes people cry
    In all forms I am well dressed
    I am the truth I need no dress
    I need no bread knife
    Hollow man is stuffed
    with struggle and strife
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    The Poet Poet (1/5/2016 11:31:00 AM)

    beautiful and with regards CPS

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/18/2015 6:09:00 AM)


    Wake up and get dressed and, face the works of the truth. Nice work. (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (12/18/2015 9:47:00 AM)

    thanx no grade
    hence 5 only
    never mind
    i have passed those stages

  • Akhtar Jawad (12/9/2015 7:52:00 PM)


    A touching poem, life is a lease and when it's about to expire, and love love of dear ones renews it, it becomes pleasant once again. (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (12/9/2015 9:17:00 PM)

    grade kindly aj

    The Poet Poet (12/9/2015 9:16:00 PM)

    ty tc gb u sir aj kindly grade it

  • Kewayne Wadley (12/7/2015 10:28:00 AM)


    Very intriguing.
    The will to live. Keep moving.
    Soul string write.
    KW
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    The Poet Poet (12/9/2015 9:15:00 PM)

    ty gb tc kindly grade it

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/6/2015 1:16:00 AM)


    Nice satire in your poem, how often we are forced to do things we do not want to do.....Any wait in life is long and long enough to reach our destination, since birth, we all keep waiting knowingly or unknowingly for the ultimate which is Death, some go early some had to wait for long with fatigue body, forgetful mind and so is the waiting in life. Yet another thought provoking poem.10 (Report) Reply

    The Poet Poet (12/9/2015 9:15:00 PM)

    ty tc gb grade it please

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2015



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