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Lease Of Life

Rating: 3.5

Last night
I was feeling cold,
nearly dead
they said wake up
yesterday’s dinner is being laid

I asked to be served in bed

No you are not dead yet
wake up get dressed

and the car is on its way
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Saturday, December 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
me poet yeps poet 15 May 2021

GOOD POEM BUT LOW VOLTAGE BUILD IT UP PLEASE

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me poet yeps poet 20 April 2021

many have to read yet do

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me poet yeps poet 21 March 2021

OLD RATING BUT STILL BEST

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Varsha M 11 June 2020

Yeah feasting on other's purse is always delicious but living on once own money pleasures beyond quest. Try it once and see.

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Bharati Nayak 10 January 2019

No you are not dead yet wake up get dressed and the car is on its way we will go to Molina Rouge your ribs we will all eat - - - - - - Our loved ones keep us alive - - A nice theme expressed with humour.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 January 2019

After reading your poem i felt for a while that I live in an era at least 100 years removed from now. You will know what I mean if you read some of my poems on death, a much repeated theme of my poems. I'm impressed, Poet's poet.'

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 February 2019

think not of death u will get depresions it will come w/o notice sir

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Prabir Gayen 29 December 2018

Good poem well executed...........

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Bri Edwards 19 September 2018

(cont.) Yeps? ? First, his ribs, they separated, then, them, they lightly marinated, Grilled three minutes on each tender side, then guests 'gobbled him up' till each was satisfied. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 19 September 2018

nearly 4 months after my first comment on this, i have (accidentally) returned; i'm glad i did. i like it more, much more i believe. and yes, i believe there is some humor, for ME at least, and...of course....pleasing Bri is what counts. to MyPoemList. (cont.)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 July 2018

A beautiful poem on life and death nicely executed. I quote, ....... No you are not dead yet wake up get dressed and the car is on its way we will go to Molina Rouge your ribs we will all eat Thanks for sharing.

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