Sunday, March 3, 2013

My Adventures In The Sea Comments

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On the sandy beach I lay,
When the waves came to take me away.
For an adventure the waves took me,
Into the vast depths of the deep sea.
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Varun Sivashankar
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Jayachandran Chakrapany 04 March 2013

A thrilling poem.I like the ending very much.

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