My All Poem by Spirit Litter

My All

Rating: 3.2


It's too bad to feel something so right
but have it to be completely out of sight.

Nothing is harder then to give your heart a song
and have everything go wrong.

Just when you think it's all great
something comes inside, and quakes.

This kind of life seems to give nothing worth saving
but when it's night, everything gone quiet,
and you're sitting all alone-
You are the who- who'll give me light.
That's when it feels right.
That's when my heart's song sings into my whole.
That's when I melt.
But you're always out of sight,
only making this seem unreal.

Too bad for the downfall,
because inside of me
you are my all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Delta 27 April 2008

heartfelt, strong emotions. i identified with this.

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Riquetta Elliott 23 April 2008

I really like this poem mam thanks.

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Adan Galvan 15 April 2008

I really enjoyed this poem.

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~ Jon London ~ 12 April 2008

I really do like this poem, it stands it's own ground good structure! ! All the best J.L

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Richy Kar 12 April 2008

really great....a rhyming poem

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