My Angel Poem by Lushan Massri

My Angel

Rating: 5.0


My angel above.
My angel below.

I get help from you, everywhere I go.

Left.
Right.

Your always in sight.

Up.
Down.
And all around.

You're with me, when I fall to the ground.

Thank you.
Thank you for all you've done.

I see now, I see where I'm supposed to be.

Devil begone, you don't belong with me.

I have My Angel right here with me. And here is where we'll be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Knight 28 November 2009

Hi Lushan - I am pleased to be the first to comment on this lovely poem because you reognise there are two types of Angel - Your Guardian Angel - 'My Angel above' All the Human Angels God promts to help us every day - including you Lushan Angel when you reach out to others - 'My Angel below'. Yes Lushan - You are a beautiful Angel! . The poem is presented in a gentle angelic way - it is bursting with emotion and it is so so complete. I have scored it a full TEN. The opening TEN lines inform us that you have an awareness of your supporting Angels 24/7. Left and right - up and down - all arond - this is awesome. You give thanks to your Angels - you recognise they protect you from The Devil - amazing. The last line is so positive and a great encouragement to all of us who believe in Angels and are available to GOD to be 'His Angels below'. 'I HAVE MY ANGEL RIGHT HERE WITH ME - AND HERE IS WHERE WE'LL BE'. A perfect poem from a beautiful Lady. Love you in Poetry - JOHN.

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