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My Babel - Poem by JAIDEEP GARG

A confusing noise surrounds me all the time
That noise of yours or mine
A noise of freedom or a noise of rebel
But I call it my Babel

A fog of Babel surrounds me this time
I can hear but I am blind
A Babel to call you my diary or my friend
I feel light when I share my thoughts to my diary
And a Babel arise when I call it my 'dear diary'

I feel honored when I talk to my friend
And a Babel arise when I call you MAM

I am wet in my emotion rain
And I stand alone in this strange land

Comments about My Babel by JAIDEEP GARG

  • (12/2/2009 5:38:00 AM)

    I really liked this poem so i decided to give you a 10 (Report) Reply

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  • (11/14/2008 11:56:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful poem, a peom from the heart of young man, with all the cacophony of the unrequited love, this poem serves to momentary give a clarity, that allright, there is still confusion! (Report) Reply

  • (9/21/2008 10:43:00 PM)

    i am wet in my emotional rain....... excellent expression. (Report) Reply

  • (9/18/2008 2:33:00 AM)

    Good one...You deserve 10 for that (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 10, 2009

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