Ambika Nair

Rookie (29/10/1991 / India)

My Beginning To Our Ending... - Poem by Ambika Nair

Durin d recess i was wid my friends telling
thm bout u & me, d moments tht v shared, d love tht i felt for u
which i guess u never did but i stil loved u more than my life...
smetimes life doesnt give us all tht we want
but i wishd it did tis tim wid me...
the bell wnt off,
when i realisd d recess ws dne.i hurried 2 my class.
as soon as i left few guys called out ur nme...
my body trembled,
i felt d shiver all thro my spine,
it was almost three yrs since someone called me by tht nme...
but was happy tht my nme was still associated wid urs...
reality dawned upon me,
i jerked & turned 2 c was tht really for me..
i crippled 2 see tht it ws not bout me anymore
but another preety face tht replaced mine.
i didnt knw hw 2 react...
a second bck i was still ther wid u & a second later i was no more.
i knew tht change ws d only constant thing in life....
but it was so fast, i didnt know tht.
it was waiting ther 2 jus fall off my eyes, blurring my vision.
controlling my emotions was d only thing tht seemd 2 me rite.
i enterd my class wid a straight face as if nothing had ever happened at all...
& there started

Comments about My Beginning To Our Ending... by Ambika Nair

  • Varanasi Ramabrahmam (12/6/2009 2:32:00 AM)

    A fine narration of first love and its consequences. The experience had must have made one matured in matters of heart and love. A tender poem full of love and agony for rejection. Even though sms English is alright, if full words are written, the flow and sense will be conveyed better. I liked the poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 6, 2009

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