Deep down a legend began
when i was declared a failure again
i became the spoilt hopeless kid,
Discarded, mocked, kicked & bullied.
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A very well penned poem abhinash.. It shows good optimism and regard for human relationships.. Well done :) But just a couple of things.. *morein= more in, *leftan= left an Just fix the typos, and it'll be better... Good evening btw, take care :)
yes a friend is no just the source of eternity but also the epitome of eternity on this fake earth.............you have perfectly delineated the image of a good friendship...........great work.
Beautiful tale of enduring friendship, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely depiction of the essence of true friendship graced with good rhyme scheme. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thanks for sharing Abinash. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
thanks a lot.. its really encouraging