Saturday, October 24, 2015

My Best Friend Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep down a legend began
when i was declared a failure again
i became the spoilt hopeless kid,
Discarded, mocked, kicked & bullied.
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abinash panda
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Chinedu Dike 01 November 2015

Beautiful tale of enduring friendship, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely depiction of the essence of true friendship graced with good rhyme scheme. A friend in need is a friend indeed. Thanks for sharing Abinash. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Abinash Panda 01 November 2015

thanks a lot.. its really encouraging

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Souren Mondal 24 October 2015

A very well penned poem abhinash.. It shows good optimism and regard for human relationships.. Well done :) But just a couple of things.. *morein= more in, *leftan= left an Just fix the typos, and it'll be better... Good evening btw, take care :)

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Abinash Panda 24 October 2015

thank u very much.. i wil c to it..

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Saheb Mohapatra 24 October 2015

yes a friend is no just the source of eternity but also the epitome of eternity on this fake earth.............you have perfectly delineated the image of a good friendship...........great work.

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