My Bestfriend Poem by jennelyn galupo

My Bestfriend

Rating: 2.8


Friends like you are few,
You are the special kind of person,
The world needs more of...
Your such a wonderful person I've meet,

It smells like fresh air,
It looks like rainbow,
It feels like flying,
It taste like sweet,
It sounds like piano.

Person like you make everything,
So much nicer to me,
You have the marvelous ability to turn happiness into
Joy and wonderful thoughts into precious memories...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Aparejo 19 October 2011

Hi Lyn, Your description about your friend is such an envy to others who are not your friend. The use of imagery and sensory images make your poem alive. However since your title is best friend, instead of using 'it' its better to use ' his' or 'her' for person. Thanks for posting.

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Ency Bearis 17 October 2011

Great tribute to a best friend, with metaphor use of words, well penned. Welcome to Poemhunter and write more.

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