Monday, October 17, 2011

My Bestfriend Comments

Rating: 2.8

Friends like you are few,
You are the special kind of person,
The world needs more of...
Your such a wonderful person I've meet,
...
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jennelyn galupo
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Susan Aparejo 19 October 2011

Hi Lyn, Your description about your friend is such an envy to others who are not your friend. The use of imagery and sensory images make your poem alive. However since your title is best friend, instead of using 'it' its better to use ' his' or 'her' for person. Thanks for posting.

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Ency Bearis 17 October 2011

Great tribute to a best friend, with metaphor use of words, well penned. Welcome to Poemhunter and write more.

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