My Big Sister Poem by Darrian Asbury

My Big Sister



I really look up to Brandie Baker
She actually has a life
She has friends
She has friends that care
I love her to death
Like my big sister

Tuesday, April 21, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: friends,sister
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brandie ......... 01 May 2009

See i like this one and not only because it is about me. You have added more words to your poem that is what you should do to strengthen other poems.

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