Saturday, July 30, 2016

My Black Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

There I can see a crow crying
on the branches of a banyan tree.
I asked her why she is crying
but no response.
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Deepa the loser
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Deepa Fernandez 01 August 2016

if the black beauty and the poet is the same person...?

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Kelly Kurt 31 July 2016

A lovely and delightful poem, Deepa. You are no loser

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Deepa Fernandez 31 July 2016

Thank you Sir, for your valuable comment...Am I a loser, if that black beauty is me myself? ?

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 July 2016

They loved each other, dreamed each other, kissed each other, hugged each other They wished to live together but... After some days, He left her. Yes...her prince went somewhere without any word. A story quite naturally runs around even if it was a bird. Thanks for the intensity of sensibility towards your black beauty. Thanks for the sharing.10 mark's for it. Subhas

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Deepa Fernandez 31 July 2016

Thank you sir, for your valuable comment.

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Deepa the loser

Deepa the loser

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