My Boat Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

My Boat



Rib are exposed to white.
Wind breaths on shadow.
Birth one seat is breached.
Love of my hull, was patched.
Her hand open, port to sail into.
Waves lose rocks fury her eyes.

Rudder speaks charmed
life is bleeding me a sea.
Bleached wood spills dream
a splinter hides one rail.

Passengers left many days ago.
Scuttled inside scarves, last seal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 10 May 2009

If 'captain' on a board, all is adjusted.

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Carol Gall 10 May 2009

the one nail is maybe one dream not spilled

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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