Forest Poems: 107 / 500

It Is Hard Being Smart

Rating: 3.8

i must hide it) lost in it(s mind..
and try not to offend those..
whom are so much... more smarter..
and so very deep..as I sleep...
and running..off.. forever lost....
back into the deepest part of the woods..
and this her forest..she shows me..
and she is pleased...that I trust her..
and I am only happy that she is happy....
and walking around her forest...I find her..
home where she lives...and knocking....
she opens her door too him....and she..
recognizing his genius....
and being now his woods.....then..
looks down at his mismatched socks...
and knowing thus as she does..
she slips him in to hers...
and like a glove it's..
universe...spiraling out word....
becomes a little bit milky.. because of it..
and I thank you....whom ever you are.

Friday, December 12, 2008
Forest Poems: 107 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: green
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
lisa moore 10 August 2009

nice poem.... im not sure what to say besides :)

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I Am Charlie 14 June 2009

See? I looked at it. I think it's over my head. Got lost after the sparrow. But still. Don't know why you'd assume ridiculous things if your that smart. nevertheless. I digress.

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 10 June 2009

This poem has such an honesty of expression that it is inherently very smart piece of work! What a smart discovery it is to understand and manifest that it is hard to be situationally smart all the time!

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Yiennarda Enk 08 June 2009

One of the things I learned... It's so hard to be a genius... You'll either die early or become a crazy old fool... so it's better to be just subtly smart! Nice post!

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Candidly and self-reflectively written; mentally original with gripping suggestions and insinuations. Indeed, wisdom begins with self-knowledge, and only the 'innocent eyes' see clearly. Great job!

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Soran M. H 29 December 2019

smart it has got different meanings to each of us, over all is good if you don't allow the others misusing it, the theme of this poem is important to many readers, thanks for sharing with us this lovely poem...10+from me well done

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Bri Edwards 31 July 2018

THANKS FOR THE WARNING! ! ! ! I SHALL CONTINUE AVOIDING Being Smart! ! ! ! mismatched socks? ? ? is that ALL i'd have to have in order to get into HERs? ? ? ? ? something is now getting hard, just thinking of it! to MyPoemList despite a bit (a few bits) of not understanding it. bri :)

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Soul Watcher 11 May 2016

This is a fantastic poem, thank you for sharing

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Kelly Kurt 24 March 2015

A fun romp through your mind. Thanks for sharing

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Heather Wilkins 16 October 2014

unmatched socks the sign of a genius nice write

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