She Is Afraid, He Is Tired..

Rating: 3.7

She is he,
and he is She.
The two,
now lost, loves heart.
And bright,
the yellow sun.

You once we're two,
as one,
and ran around the world.
Inside both heads.

He fell inside loves fire.
And she,
his red heart pumping burned

Both fires,
burned ice cold hot.
Within Her,
light did give us form.

Over shadows love,
swept out black coals.

Your smile, twin lips.
He kissed, both miss.


His face, from that.
Bright coals, still hiss.

Now alone again,
he walks into.

Loves,
loving great full moon.

She Is Afraid, He Is Tired..
Saturday, May 16, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: green
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 29 May 2013

a good write about a lost love.Perhaps t will return someday.

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Kristina B; Williams 26 June 2009

ABSOLUTELY ENTHRALLING..ANOTHER 10..I FEEL LIKE SIMON ON AMERICAN IDOL, WHEN I SAY THIS..IT IS VERY RARE THAT I GIVE 10S..SO WHEN I DO, BELIEVE ME I ENJOY EM..THANKS 4 THE INVITE, NOW IVE GOT ANOTHER POET THATS INSIGHTFUL...IVE RECIEVED LIKE 60 INVITES, READ, VOTED EVERY1....REPLIED, NEVER LIED TO ANY OF THEM, NEVER WILL..I GOT A TOP TEN POET LIST ON THIS PROGRAM, POEMHUNTERS, AND YOUR IN THAT 10, CONGRATS..HOPE THAT DIDNT COME OUT WRONG, NOT LIKE IM SOMEBODY SPECIAL, LIKE SAYING THAT IF I GIVE YOU 10S, THAT IT MEANS A BIG THING, WHAT I MEAN IS THAT BESIDES MY OWN POEMS, IM NOT A BIG FAN OF READING POEMS...NO THAT CAME OUT WRONG AGAIN..SO I WILL JUST SIMPLY SAY, YOU ARE A GREAT POET, YOUR POEMS ARE ENJOYFUL TO READ..HOPE YOU KEEP WRITING, CUZ YOUR ONE OF THE FEW WHO ARE THE GREAT 1S

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Panagiota Romios 03 October 2019

A very Owner ful poem on life and love, thank you. Panagiota Romios

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Denis Mair 18 April 2020

Owner-ful and wonderful. This 10-worthy poem stimulates the owner of words to create new ones!

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T McH 22 June 2009

'It is your sea' has to be one of the most adorable and insightful lines. t x

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Duke Perry Abrokwa 13 June 2020

Just love it. A masterpiece of great creatively

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 March 2020

A great poem! My pleasure reading this magnificent piece of work time and again!

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Soran M. H 22 December 2019

all your poems are unique and different, poetic style and new feeling covering your language and images, that is the the meaning of creativity, look like you live poetic life too, congratulation and wish you all the best..10/10 from me...regards

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Sarah Shahzad 11 December 2019

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 November 2019

Over shadows love, swept out black coals. Your smile, twin lips. He kissed, both miss.........//// it's beautiful poem// FAV one also

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