My Concern Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

My Concern

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Heart that longs
Wish that jumps
Mind that runs
But life is full of fun

Once missed the train
It may amount pain
But miss not ever
The loss shall not be for ever

Life may always remind you
Of lovely past that you passed through
Think of wind that blew cold
Thereafter you had new world

It is your concern
With very good turn
Live in present tense
There prevails good sense

Monday, May 12, 2014
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Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 1 hr · Unlike · 1

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Paniz Sh, Lynnesey Marie McDougall and Anjana Choudhary like this. 1 share Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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As always your poem is aces 1 minute ago by Anna Ciogayt | Reply

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Good... Caesar Goveas3 minutes ago It's a good thought but I feel you tried to force the rhymes

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Heart that longs Wish that jumps

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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